LA

I love LA

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I think my best work was my, I believe personal essay because in a book you really only know the main parts of their thinking but you really lived what you’re talking about and you have your own personal stories and thoughts. I think my work could have been better if I added a couple more of my thought and feelings. Maybe I could have even added another story about how I wrote to Evan or how I was thinking about him a lot. My thoughts really could have boosted the essay up a little because I was worried but I was happy to come home and see him. It was hard to talk about it because it is very personal to both Evan and I. The other part of the assignment was the glog. I could have done better on the glog if I maybe put a picture if Evan and I or put some more text on the page. I thought the peer reviews I got were very helpful and definitely got my essay higher on my chart of best writing essays.